Sunday, January 22, 2012

daybreak



daybreak, still limbs lace
to gray sky, wait for the next
storm to shake open

morning, still sleeping
shuttered windows conceal the
cold face of daybreak.
Posted by Steven Federle at 7:34 AM

6 comments:

  1. Perfectly captured! I love the 'still limbs lace to gray sky' season!

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  2. Great Haiku. I like the combination of verse and image.

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  4. Well done. Your two closing lines are outstanding.

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  6. Wonderful piece Steven! I love the Haiku and the imagery, though it kind of made me feel cold and alone. Job well done. Blessings.

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