I like the word Faith in your labels - takes faith to make such a crossing, yet somehow we do it.
A very intriguing write, facing fear to move ahead rather than return to the security of what lay behind in the past. Good stuff here Steven!
my heart beat fast at the idea of the tidal vibrations rattling the ears. And the moon driven waves gave me a thrill. Nice writing.
This is fantastic stuff. I wasn't crazy about it the first time I read it a couple of days ago but reading it now I feel the suspense. Good flow and the word-choice is nice and there's no excess anywhere, taut.
Interesting thought this posed