Thursday, January 9, 2014

Radiant Day

radiant day,
gentle winds
blow away
all raw weather
as skies dive deep
into blue ponds  
while above in barren trees
the young sun
strokes small branches,
and emergent buds wait
for the green season.

6 comments:

  1. Radient newness weaves through your images.

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  2. What a lovely succinct poem; it just rings with hope! Very nice.

    http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2014/01/this-is-new.html

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  3. my favorite lines:

    while above in barren trees
    the young sun
    strokes small branches,
    and emergent buds wait
    for the green season.

    lovely work!!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  4. radiant day - Great line that just draws you in. Full of hope for a new day.

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  5. I like the hope and newness you've created through the images of your poem.

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  6. Oh I'm lying on the grass, with my hands under my head enjoying this beautiful day with you.

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